Friendly Betrayal Breakdown and Review

 FADE IN:

INT. SHANICE'S BEDROOM -- MORNING

SHANICE JONES (mid-twenties, short with a heavy build, and light-brown skinned, Hispanic woman) wakes up to an ringing alarm clock and sees a line of servants ready to help her get dressed. Shanice gets out of bed and a team of maids make her bed.

INT. SPACIOUS BATHROOM -- MOMENTS LATER

Shanice walks into a spacious bathroom of a 2 bedroom luxury apartment home in Miami Florida to see her robe, bath towel, wash cloth and shower cap have been laid on the tub.

INT. SHANICE’S BEDROOM –- MORNING

Shanice comes out of the bathroom wearing a bathrobe and looks at the clothing rack filled with designer clothes for her choosing. She tries on every outfit and gets very irritated as everything that she has tried on is either too tight or doesn’t look right on her. She picks the last outfit

from off the rack, then fights to get the pants on. Shanice yells out in frustration as she bends over, and realizes those pants are also too tight. 

Her frustration grows when she can't button the matching blouse. She excuses the servants and pulls clothes

out of her closet. She dumps the clothes on top of another pile already on her bed. She surrenders, and pulls a

pair of oversized jeans from under the pile of clothes and slides them on. She moves more clothes to get to a

T-shirt, then puts that on.

Shanice takes one long look in the mirror, then in disgust begins to fuss over her hair. She gets frustrated then just combs her hair back into a ponytail.  She looks at herself again, and covers her eyes to meditate.  Feeling defeated, she gathers all of the clothes from her bed then throws them into the hallway, and closes the door.

 INT. APARTMENT HALLWAY –- CONTINUOUS

The doorbell rings and Shanice walks out of her room. The servants hurry to collect the clothes to re-hang them on the rack.

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Shanice Jones, a mid-twenties Hispanic woman, wakes up in her luxury Miami apartment to a team of servants who assist her with getting dressed. In her spacious bathroom, she finds her robe, towel, washcloth, and shower cap neatly prepared for her. However, as she moves back to her bedroom, she struggles with her designer clothes, feeling frustrated as nothing fits right. After failing to get into several outfits, she pulls on oversized jeans and a T-shirt, ultimately settling for a simple look.

Shanice becomes irritated with her appearance and attempts to tame her hair, but ends up just tying it into a ponytail. She throws her discarded clothes in the hallway and closes her bedroom door. Moments later, the doorbell rings, and her servants rush to re-hang the clothes.